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Monday, October 27, 2008

status: 25 days left
weather: slightly warm
health: chest pains and droopy eyelids

apparently I write coherently but my theses are too vague. I get notes like, "Rachel, considering that this paper has such a terribly broad thesis and jumps around from film to film, you made it work quite successfully."
Maybe I need to make use of the writing center. I got style, I got pronunciation, but I can't figure out how to make a narrow thesis and use it for four pages...

"I've got my feet on the ground and I don't go to sleep to dream."
-Fiona Apple

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